#1
Instrumental Piece.

3 Guitars.
1 Bass.
1 Drums.
1 Piano.

Enjoy.

:3

EDIT: Updated with lyricsss
Attachments:
MyPeople.gp4
MyPeople.gp5
MyPeople.mid
[img]http://i.imgur.com/LYZyCdp.gif[/img]


Quote by CrossBack7
Momie's like not even a real person, just an asian, lesbian spirit.
Last edited by Momentosis at Sep 21, 2009,
#2
link?

EDIT: yeah, so nice progressions throughout the verse and chorus parts. nothing really caught my attention though, until the buildup at the solo; very nice there. if you hold the final D on the Solo guitar for another measure it crackles into death . the intro seemed a little tacked on, but I guess it's alright. other than that, solid song (at least 6-7/10) with final score depending on vocals/lyrics.

oh and you can crit either in my sig.
Last edited by gnomieowns at Sep 20, 2009,
#3
Oh ****.

My bad. XD

Sorry.
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Quote by CrossBack7
Momie's like not even a real person, just an asian, lesbian spirit.
#4
Quote by gnomieowns
link?

EDIT: yeah, so nice progressions throughout the verse and chorus parts. nothing really caught my attention though, until the buildup at the solo; very nice there. if you hold the final D on the Solo guitar for another measure it crackles into death . the intro seemed a little tacked on, but I guess it's alright. other than that, solid song (at least 6-7/10) with final score depending on vocals/lyrics.

oh and you can crit either in my sig.


Intro did seem a little a little tacked on... I think it sounds less tacked on with lyrics though.

I like the buildup as well.
[img]http://i.imgur.com/LYZyCdp.gif[/img]


Quote by CrossBack7
Momie's like not even a real person, just an asian, lesbian spirit.
#5
As I listen:

Intro: Good, but the transition to the verse seems a bit akward.

Verse: Not bad.

Pre-Chorus: Nice build-up.

Chorus: Pretty good; I like it.

Verse: It's okay, pretty much the same as above.

Chorus: Still good.

Solo: Cool; I think it's good.

Outro: Perfect.

I really don't like the transition to the Verse from the Intro, but overall, you've written a great song. I'd say 8/10.

If you could return the favor, I need opinions on the one the "C4C" in my sig links to.