#2
Its kinda cool, its not really hard rock, more like techno rock or something. Your tone was really thin, I would add some mids and tremble, but you may of been going for that kind of sound. The bass sounded really good, so did the drums, your voice was pertty good. The song was put together pertty good, nothing wrong with the progression, just needs to be mixed better.

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1203448