#2
Finally something other than "Metalcore" or "Death Metal."

I like to critique as I go along.

The intro is alright, nothing too catchy and a cliche rhythm that works. The lead guitar fade ins are cool. Drums are a little to boring right now. The harmony parts are cool. Bass could be flashier.

17-20 is really cool. Guitar re-intro is alright. Once again, nothing special, but it works. The chug chug riff continues, it works.

The chorus has this kind of pop-punk anthem feel.

Over all, drums could be flashier and so could the bass.

On pure music, I'd only give this a 7/10, but because of the funk, I'll give it an 8/10.

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#3
thnx for input, i was writing this at like 3:00 in the morning so i didnt put much time on the drums and bass. ill work on that