just awsome. It's really great. The guitar could be a bit more bassy.

You're voice is great. Suits the song perfectly... Reminds me a bit of the 80s
It's really good man, chill out, your voice is just fine, I could listen to you on a record, plus, you'll only get better in time.
Thanks dudes

I agree the guitar is really thin. It adds a quite needed percussive effect though, when the bass comes in it evens out abit.

Any of your stuff I could crit back?
The singing isn't bad at all dude. In addition to the guitar being thin, the song really needs drums but it's good even without them. The melody is good too! The verse and the chorus sound similar, but not enough to be repetitive. Good song!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1195648

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