#3
I think from bar 16 - bar 30 is just out of place . Doesn't fit the mood that was created and just doesn't transition well :\
#4
Quote by 21Fretter
I think from bar 16 - bar 30 is just out of place . Doesn't fit the mood that was created and just doesn't transition well :\


This.
This choice is passion, this path is tension.
#5
Quote by 21Fretter
I think from bar 16 - bar 30 is just out of place . Doesn't fit the mood that was created and just doesn't transition well :\

Agreed. It sounded like a Chinese opera.
Gear:
Schecter C-1 Hellraiser (EMG 81/85)
Dean Dime-o-Flage (Stock)

Amplification/Effects
Boss DD-7 Digital Delay
Boss TU-2 Chromatic Stompbox Tuner
Boss NS-2 Noise Suppressor
Ibanez TS9DX Turbo Tube Screamer
Peavey 6505+ Half Stack
#6
Quote by 21Fretter
I think from bar 16 - bar 30 is just out of place . Doesn't fit the mood that was created and just doesn't transition well :\

Yeah, Chinese opera.
Otherwise it is really good, that part is just way to upbeat and out there for it.
#7
I liked it despite bars 17-29 and the reason has been said.

The other parts make you in a kind of a sad mood, and the 17-29 ruins it, but it builds up again.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21748254
I live near Lake Bodom WORSHIP MEEEEEEE

Quote by Sami Philadelph
LOL, for some reason the impression I get from you is like some wacky Frank Zappa of metal pulling pranks at the Grammys and telling crude jokes during interviews.