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Alright, this one is one I wrote about how I see my family sometimes. Don't get me wrong, I love 'em, but occasionally they piss me off 'cuz they're so hypocritical. Anyway, it's got a Slayer/Lamb of God kind of feel. Please, let me know what you think!


Skies are gray! My sunshine has clouded away!
But I'll see you another day! And the masses will flock post-haste!

Dying deeds! Punish the unholy breed!
Victimize only me! Hypocritic fascist regime!

Cooperate or penetrate!
Annihilate my love and hate!

Don't drip my blood!
Intravenous is shunned!
Don't hate my love!
Or you'll strain us... to done!

Desecrate! Orders are to violate!
Der Fuhrer says to dessicate! And what do you do but obey!

Deities! Hot headed celebrities!
Blood laced pollution debris! Get off those mindless knees!

Insecure, yet set for sure!
Heil Der Fuhrer, mind: open yours!

Don't drip my blood!
Intravenous is shunned!
Don't hate my love!
Or you'll strain us... to done!

Ruuuuuuun!
far away!
Nooooooooooo!
place to stay!
Woooooorth-
less decay!
There will come a day!

Revenge!

Don't drip my blood!
Intravenous is shunned!
Don't hate my love!
Or you'll strain us... to done!

Don't drink my blood!
Vicious demon is done!
Decay your love!
So you reckon... us done!


I'm entirely open for praise as well as criticism! It needs a title too! What do you think? I'd love to hear your thoughts so I can get this song to it's very best!
METALLICA!!!
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Last edited by SaiNt adEL #13 at Sep 22, 2009,