#1
So this is a pretty personal song. I just moved from the UK to Canada.
I don't want to change it too much. ** means I'm not sure about the line.
Title will probably be changed.
C4C

Slowly Losing Interest

I'm slowly losing interest
In what you have to say
Emails only twice a month
We said every single day
Letters growing shorter
And further apart each time
What was once signed with x's
Now only a couple of lines

I'm thinking I should move along
You're starting to fade away
I'm thinking I should move along
'Cos I know I'm here to stay


A 10 hour flight
And 5 months later
The occasional chat on Windows Live
But nothing greater **
You promised me you'd visit
In only a couple of years
Bring along some old friends
I'd love to see familiar faces

I'm thinking I should move along
You're starting to fade away
I'm thinking I should move along
'Cos I know I'm here to stay


I'm slowly losing interest
In what you have to say
Emails only twice a month
We said every single day
Letters growing shorter
And further apart each time
What was once signed with x's
Now only a couple of lines

A 10 hour flight
And 5 months later
The occasional chat on Windows Live
But nothing greater **
You promised me you'd visit
In only a couple of years
Bring along some old friends
I'd love to see familiar faces

I will post a recording soon
My current acoustic group:

Fiftieth Parallel

Martin Guitars
Elixer Strings
Acoustic amplification
BOSS pedals

Last edited by jon93971 at Sep 25, 2009,
#2
that is very good, i always have troubles with lyrics..

and i like the "greater **" line
#3
Instead of "greater" you could use "much deeper"- would help show how superficial it has all become and if I'm doing the rythmn correctly it flows better- very good lyrics, I saw the picture you were trying to paint.
#5
those are real solid man. i very much enjoy the first verse. theres a lotta power there. the last line in that first verse would work better without the of imo. but thats just the way i was reading it, it could very well work the way you have it in mind.

overall, great writing dude
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#6
I'm thinking I should move along
You're starting to fade away
I'm thinking I should move along
'Cos I know I'm here to stay

I love that bit =]