#1
I thought I would try something a bit different. I'm going for more of a Three Days Grace playing style with this song. I know the drum is repetitive, but its the best i can do. I was kinda thinking back on my depression episode, and I just played to express myself, and this is what was created.

Tell my what yall think. What needs improvement?

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/ethan_hanus/music/all/play705920

If you leave me a link, I will crit yours.
#2
I like the tone except with the palm mutes.. sound kinda lifeless?
The lead tone is great for the genre if you ask me.
I think you should use octave chords instead of w/e powerchords you are using for the rhythm especially the part at 1:51. It would work great with a really modern tone and octaves.
Its a pretty solid piece so far. Program yourself some slightly more interesting drums or record it full band and let me hear it again. 7.5/10
#3
Wow 73 Original song, that very amazing...

-Your acoustic guitar sound good! (Not only in this song)
-I really like the tone of your rhytm guitar.
-Maybe change a bit the tone of your lead and it could sound much more awesome!
-The drum seem a bit repetitive, no bass?
-Take a EQModifier and maybe add a few more loudness sound (bass,high less mid). To compense for not having bass.
-I know i've maybe said a lot of bad comment but i really enjoy your song! You seem to be a very good songwritter, keep it up!

Overall... It's mostly your sound, (with a bass player i think it will boost your song and make it very nice).

That it, keep it up!
Crit mine?: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1202011

Thanks!

-MDP
#4
you STOLE my song name!!!

No, but seriously, I dug it. Not exactly my kinda song, but I can imagine being at a show jumping up and down to this. And someone doing an insane rap over it. nice snare on the drums, but I can't hear the bass (not the frequency, I mean the instrument). I dug the part at 1:48, but coulda been a bigger explosion at the end. Overall, that really was cool.

Check out song called alone? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1202906
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#5
^ lol, I wonder how many songs out there are called Alone.

But I didnt use a bass, I dont have a bass guitar, so I cant record a bass. But if I did, it would have to be a 5 stringer, and there a bit out of my budget. I'm thinking I'm gona rerecord the rythem with more gain so it dosent seem so lifeless, and play with the volume of the rythem guitar so it sounds more booming in the chours and bridge.

Thanks for the feedback guys.