You should work on some techniques like Palm Muting and should watch your right hand... especially the way you're holding the pick... looks a bit loose to me.

Regarding that you've started a month ago, it's pretty good!

(Ah, I listened to when i come around, cause it's the one I like most of those you played )
ya bro, ur playing the right notes, thats good. ur playing the chords well, just need to work on ur strumming hand. just like the guy said, relax ur hand.

Try listening to the songs a lot without playing and memorize, or listen to urself without the music, and see if it sounds exactly the same. Usualy u'll notice a couple of strums out of place.

But good work nonetheless, keep it up!
Ya working on your palm muting would be good but youre pretty good for just a month
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