#1
ayo. Just a new song I recorded today...first song on my profile. let me know what you think.
#2
I like it. The vocal delivery was very solid, and reminiscent of Death Cab, or Taking Back Sunday. I dug the arpeggios, and the harmonics were a nice effect (wish I could do that). Pacing was fine, nothing really to comment on. Just a solid song.

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#4
i like it! everything sounded great, although the couple pauses seemed a little too drawn out. maybe if you did some kind of fill there either with the acoustic or even a piano, that might sound cool. and i also listened to the song about mathematics or whatever, is that you doing vocals?

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Originally posted by primusfan
When you crank up the gain to 10 and switch to the lead channel, it actually sounds like you are unjustifiably bombing an innocent foreign land.


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#5
Alright, thanks for all the feedback guys, I'm gonna crit you all back right now, as quickly as I can.

In regards to the pause, yeah I basically kind of meant for it to be a fake ending. I want it to stay like that but I was actually thinking of putting in a REALLY quiet piano part during that silence, like something you wouldnt notice at first but you could faintly hear it so you turn the volume up, then it just all comes back in normal volume. I think it'd be cool, I dunno I'll try it and put it up once I do.

And yes, that is me screaming in Mathematics is the language of nature haha.