#1
let the record spin
let the cd play

listen to the words
the words we say

sunny skies and lullaies
just close your eyes
and look to the sky
Cause I feel alright
i feel alright
i feel alright...
tonight

The clouds of the night
the stars are so bright
the stars
the stars...
in your eyes


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Thanks!
#2
This can become a very beautiful song

It is very beautiful because it is very simple, but without loosing any of its charm. It has a very sincere, innocent felling to it and if put to a good song I'd denfenitily cover it And that's saying something.

Keep on Writing Peace
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