No offense, but it's a little dull. It's very repetitive, which is fine in itself, but the riffing is so simplistic and the structure so predictable that it ends up dragging on, sorry. It might be better with vocals.
Hmm, I'm inspired by Kataklysm-ish 2002-2008 period, which includes not too hard-playing riffs. I like more melodic their stuff...and more simple, you're right. But...thanx for the crit anyway.
well i thought that was very good, if this was not a instrumental song and you added some vocals thats would sound sick imo
Jackson DK2M
Peavey Vypyr 15w
Boss ME-25