#1
Hey could u guys tell me what u think is it to repetitive??? please help, any ideas?? i feel like im stuck. on this project and i really want to finish it.
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#2
Unfortunately it is a bit repetitive atm. I find even if you are reusing the same chords, if you change the strumming rhythm vs just the strumming dynamics (which chords are palm muted etc) it can help a lot with the repetitiveness aspect. You can also throw in a couple of extra notes, a 7th, 9th etc, can help change the sound a lot of a riff but you still have the core structure there.

This is all imo, i could be a terrible writer :P Who knows :\
Last edited by 21Fretter at Sep 26, 2009,
#3
i dont think its too bad. It would sound way better with singing, and what the other guy said.
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#4
Quote by Xmetal_headX
i dont think its too bad. It would sound way better with singing, and what the other guy said.

i will keep working on that it just feels like im stuck in a loop
#5
Quote by RockxxStar
i will keep working on that it just feels like im stuck in a loop



I was bored just now so I thought I'd take a crack at it. I started the changes at bar 21 where it started to sound a bit repetitive. Also I ended up making an ending at bar 33 because the drums stopped. xD


Hopefully, this might give you some new ideas.
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#6
Quote by dandan321
I was bored just now so I thought I'd take a crack at it. I started the changes at bar 21 where it started to sound a bit repetitive. Also I ended up making an ending at bar 33 because the drums stopped. xD


Hopefully, this might give you some new ideas.

wow thx buddy.. i enjoyed it... it gave me an idea
#8
Quote by Msu_Man04
It's not bad at all, it sounds like it could be a really fun, Blink-esque song, especially int he beginning. I'd like to see you work on it a bit more.

thats the style im aiming for im glad you liked it man ^^