#2
i didnt really like the dissonance at the beginning, but once the full band kicked in it sounded cool. weird haha. i really liked the guitar melodies. very catchy. the only thing to really work on would be developing the song more to make it longer and have more parts.

crit me?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1207909
Originally posted by primusfan
When you crank up the gain to 10 and switch to the lead channel, it actually sounds like you are unjustifiably bombing an innocent foreign land.


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#3
thanks
I really never planned on making it too long, I really only intended it to have the solo and some sort of cool riff I could have drums just pound along to. I may rework it sooner or later but for now it'll probably remain this way.

thanks again!