#1
heres an idea for something i have

Sittin' at home cryin' all alone
in front of the mirror
she says "me and him are done"
but she knows the better

he thinks "how could i have done such a
horrible thing"
he knows that he cant run but hes
too scared to face the shame, cause

he beats her everyday and
shes so damn beautiful
he don't even know what he'll lose if
he cant turn this all around
turn it all around

sittin' by herself makin up excuses like
"his past was rough"
she nknows its not the truth and that
he just feels the need to act tough

he feels like **** thinkin
'i cant run"
he knows hes got to try and
right all the wrongs that he's done
cause

he beats her everyday and
shes so damn beautiful, yeah
he don't even know what he'll lose if
he cant turn this all around
turn it all around


I dont have any ideas for a bridge yet, if there woudl even be one.

I just kind started writing when bored on my math paper, and this came out

what do yall think?
#2
"he beats her everyday and
shes so damn beautiful, yeah
he don't even know what he'll lose if
he cant turn this all around
turn it all around"

wow you must really hate math
Roses are red
Voilets are blue
The only bulge in my pocket is my wallet
No i'm not happy to see you
#3
Quote by silent caution
"he beats her everyday and
shes so damn beautiful, yeah
he don't even know what he'll lose if
he cant turn this all around
turn it all around"

wow you must really hate math

haha it goes better with the chords. like if i can sing it and upload sometime oull atleast see the rhythm of it.
#4
what kind of song style?
Roses are red
Voilets are blue
The only bulge in my pocket is my wallet
No i'm not happy to see you
#5
Quote by silent caution
what kind of song style?

light rock i guess.

verse is acoustic/clean.

chorus is just 3 chords, with a real bassy thick distortion. vocals are kindof a low bariton estyle. singer kinda reminds me of eddie vedder. kinda sounds like a pearl jam song a little. fairly slow in chorus. verse has a nice rhythym thats upbeat soundig
#6
im a big fan of pearl jam so if it has some of that element to it, then its good...its actually not bad lyrics
Roses are red
Voilets are blue
The only bulge in my pocket is my wallet
No i'm not happy to see you
#7
Quote by silent caution
im a big fan of pearl jam so if it has some of that element to it, then its good...its actually not bad lyrics



just picture that real thick kind of sound they have. warm and thick. verse is alot faster vocals wise than chorus. chorus just really slows it down in a way.

what could change in lyrics?

make it better, yet keep the same idea goin? the same feel