#2
bump lol, what i made must be really **** or no one ever comes on this forum
ESP H-401FM
Jackson DK2M
Peavey Vypyr 15w
Boss ME-25
#3
leave constructive criticism on other people's work, and ask them to return the favour
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'If I were not a physicist, I would probably be a musician. I often think in music. I live my daydreams in music. I see my life in terms of music.' Albert Einstein
#4
You have one riff and one break (or whatever you call it). That's hardly enough for a song so try adding some other stuff to it or it will remain monotonous.
Also those (no3) chords don't really feel right, at least for me.
The ending from bar 47 just isn't good. Of course this might be just my taste.
#5
Lol ive only been playing a year and im still learning how to use the program and im working on the quantity and quantity, ive added a solo and a new breakdown so im up to 60 bars, im aiming for 100 but the verses are really short so im going to lengthen them so ill be at 80 bars by then
ESP H-401FM
Jackson DK2M
Peavey Vypyr 15w
Boss ME-25