#1
C4C.
I already have the music written on Guitar Pro, those of you who want to hear how it fits can PM me.

Sing for me;
I need to hear your voice, so soothing.
Sin for me;
to know that I'm not alone, so moving.

Burn for me;
bake underneath the frozen sun, yeah
Show me heat;
because everything's so cold and done.

All is well, that stays in hell.
Just keep me out and I don't care; at all.

Don't blame me;
it's not my fault that you seem to
Reach for me;
there's no reason to involve two.

Burn for me;
bake underneath the frozen sun, yeah
Show me heat;
because everything's so cold and done.

All is well, that stays in hell.
Just keep me out and I don't care; at all.

All is well, that stays in hell.
Just keep me out and I don't care; at all.
#2
I read through this quite a few times trying to figure out what to crit, but honestly I couldn't think of anything that needed changing. Well done. Very, very good and solid piece!
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#3
nice Writing of this song
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Guitars
Fender American Highway One Stratocaster
2001 Fender Mexican Stratocaster
Taylor Bigbaby
Amp
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Pedals
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Digitech Screamin Blues Pedal
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