#1
Been working on this for a while. Not the most original thing since it uses a progression which I believe is a very well known classical progression, idk.

Check it out, I will return crit if you leave a link.

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#2
i really like the progression. it does sound familiar, but you pulled it off well anyway. the clean part went on a little long at the beginning. i think it would sound cool with a little lead over it during the second half. all the harmonies sound really good. the solo sounds very guns n roses-esque. has a really cool feel to it. great playing throughout.

crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1207909
Originally posted by primusfan
When you crank up the gain to 10 and switch to the lead channel, it actually sounds like you are unjustifiably bombing an innocent foreign land.


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#3
Good song, I really like the whole thing, it went together pertty well, the intro part was kinda freaky, I forget what effect is used to make that sound, but it was cool. One thing I have to comment on is your lead tone, it was horrid, too muddy and harsh. But your rythem tone was great, very low and punishing. Good job overall.

Crit mine? Its an entire album, but if you could crit at least one song I would appriciate it.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1208410