#1
A song I've been working on the last couple of days, it's unfinished but I'd like some feedback before I go ahead and continue it.

Also, I'm giving you a cheese warning ahead of time :P.
Attachments:
Empire Eclipse.gp5
Empire Eclipse.mid
Last edited by Z3r0747 at Sep 28, 2009,
#2
cant get it man
Self proclaimed prophets are great people...
#3
****, I'm having issues attaching things.
Last edited by Z3r0747 at Sep 28, 2009,
#4
sounds pretty awesome. Really like the part that starts at 1:23. At the risk of being accused of liking dragonforce i have to say it sounds a bit like them at that section. But thats when dragonforce is playing ACTUAL melodies... not just "dragonforce melodies"
Self proclaimed prophets are great people...
#5
Updated it again, gave it some length and a section for a solo that I haven't written yet
#7
The vocals before the chorus made it flow weirdly for me.

There was C chord in the verse that I don't think fit very well.

All i really have to say crit wise. I enjoyed it, sounded solid. Maybe throw in a solo after the drum interlude and go into the outro you already have.