overall good track. nice playing.

the only things i would change:

the drums are very laid back, even when the guitar gets chaotic, so it kinda clashes.
the rhythm guitar is very muddy and low in the mix. maybe raise it up a bit and lower the mids a bit and raise the treble?
also, sometimes when the lead is doing some low notes and the rhythm is playing behind it, the 2 tracks kinda mix together in a bad way.

i think if you changed a couple of the drum parts to match the mood of the song, and eq'd the rhythm track differently, itd sound awesome

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21792013#post21792013
Originally posted by primusfan
When you crank up the gain to 10 and switch to the lead channel, it actually sounds like you are unjustifiably bombing an innocent foreign land.

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Last edited by InanezGuitars44 at Sep 28, 2009,