Can you guys help me figure out where to go with this one, i dont know exactly where to go with it cus whenever i write something i never think its as good as it could be.

I included an acoustic version of the song which goes all the way to the chorus, no bridge or outro though. i think the main verse is too happy compared to the dark intro, whay do you guys think?

What do you guys think of both versions? how do you think the version progress from here?
My Fire incomplete.gp5
My Fire incomplete.gp4
My Fire C# acoustic.gp5
My Fire C# acoustic.gp4
Last edited by megagage at Sep 29, 2009,