#2
ha gave me a big smile. very fun. as a fun little pop song i really like it. taking it as a serious song, however, it doesnt seem very good. but it seems like its just for fun. the recording is good too. all the tones sound pretty good.

crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1207909
Originally posted by primusfan
When you crank up the gain to 10 and switch to the lead channel, it actually sounds like you are unjustifiably bombing an innocent foreign land.


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#3
I love punk rock, I dont know what it is, but its just makes me happy. Its pertty cool, sounds like bowling for soup a little bit, it could use some work, but you can leave it just like it is and say you where going for a old Greenday kinda sound. It was structured nicely, its just the guitar tone was a bit harsh, more bass I think.


Crit mine? I'll leave you an entire album to crit you can just crit one song, I dont mind.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1208410
#4
It wasn't exactly my cup of tea however that said, it was far from bad. I bet if it were played live it would get the crowd going. great energy and vibe. I did think that the lyrics sounded a bit creepy at times and that the music was somewhat bland. maybe try adding in an exotic sounding scale to make you stand out?
#5
good energy. very early greenday ish. haha a fun song man. you should start cursing at the end though. that would be funny. vocals are good for the style but they seem kind of airy/light. not bad though. this would be a great song to close a set with. it is what it is, and its good. well done man. now i cant get this out of my head haha

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22094129#post22094129
#6
very nice, i really like the overall sound. lyrics are really good, but the vocals didn't stand out too much. i think they could be mixed just a little higher. the lead line was really, really good. i agree with the others in that i hear early green day in it. sounds like it could be off of kerplunk!, which i really good to me. nice fade out at the end.
i would say just mix the vocals a little higher/louder, and you got yourself a really nice song.

also, thanks for the crit on mine!
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