song's on my profile. I called it 1:54am, because i started writing it a few weeks back at midnight, and finished it by 1:54am. Will crit for crit when asked.


Its not bad, you have a really good voice, fits the song pertty well. The guitar work was nice, but the tone suffered, you prolly used a laptop mic or something. Its a neat song, very calming.

Crit mine?