#1
She lingers in my mouth, dear god get her out,
It’s not where she’s to be,
And she’s haunting me,
And she’s haunting me,

Build these walls sky high,
To protect her from my lies,
There’s no honor among these thieves,
So we’ll string them in the trees.

Mark my words from the highest parts,
This silence won’t be heard,
My defects laid to rest, my defects laid to rest,
Only ten feet from my eyes.

Build these walls sky high,
To protect her from my lies,
There’s no honor among these thieves,
So we’ll string them in the trees.

It’s a shame how times will change,
And worlds will fall and form the end of all.
We could be.

c4c and junks
#2
Theres no Honor among these thieves
So we'll String them in the trees
-Matt Chavie

Epic...

I will be quoting that soon to friends.

That was a great job.
I bet Charlie Brown's teacher's name was Mrs.Hammett
#3
Quote by Matt Chavie
She lingers in my mouth, dear god get her out,
It’s not where she’s to be,
And she’s haunting me,
And she’s haunting me,
Nice first verse. Really interesting wording.

Build these walls sky high,
To protect her from my lies,
There’s no honor among these thieves,
So we’ll string them in the trees.
The second line feels weak, but the rest is great. Second two lines are really good.

Mark my words from the highest parts,
This silence won’t be heard,
My defects laid to rest, my defects laid to rest,
Only ten feet from my eyes.
I really like this verse. Keeps the mood going well. Again, interesting wording.

Build these walls sky high,
To protect her from my lies,
There’s no honor among these thieves,
So we’ll string them in the trees.

It’s a shame how times will change,
And worlds will fall and form the end of all.
We could be.
Satisfying ending to a satisfying piece.

c4c and junks


Overall, a good read. Great word usage. I enjoyed it.