#1
all alone
i sit
on my throne of ****

and i feel
that these lies
are not worth hiding

and i know
that this
cant not keep going

im so sick
i wish
i could just let go

(chorus)
yeah i have my problems
its nothing i can hide
and i feel so much pain
from tryin to live this life

i wish you
would try and understand
while ignorance is bliss
i need a loving hand


I dont know. again, in my (BORING) math class i just wrote this. so far i guess thats the first verse and chorus

what yall think?
#3
Please read the rules. They explain what to do to get comments on your piece. Bumping is not the way to do it.

Feel free to re-post this tomorrow keeping the rules in mind.

Thanks.