#1
Wake Up!

Its dark
Inside of my mind
Don't know where I'm going
Because I'm blind
This place
Isn't where I wanna be
Looking around
Doesn't help me
I'm lost
In the depths of time
One look in your eyes
And I feel sublime

(Chorus)
Wake up!
Its a beautiful day!
The sun is shining!
The rain has gone away!
Wake up!
I know you are here!
The sun is shining!
There's nothing to fear!

Out of darkness
A flash appears
Its radiance blinds me
I pass through the years
Your voice bids me
To look at the light
They slowly open
And feel the bite
I grow worried
It pierces the night
But when you're near me
I know I'll be alright

(Chorus)

Relief
The night has gone
I regain feeling
And welcome the dawn
We stand up
It's just us
The darkness has passed
For me that's enough
I look around
Observing my surroundings
One thing stands out
Its you

(Chorus)


Note: This is the first time I have attempted to write lyrics, so all feedback is much appreciated.
#3
Its sung in a more broken fashion, with about a measure pause between lines. I suppose it would make more sense in context with the music.
#4
Rather than break this down line for line…this is raw emotion. Good start for lyrics. You need to take and develop this. A good introduction is your favorite music. I wager your favorite songs have “universal lyrics” which allow you to relate in your own way. This is what I mean by “development”. Take what you have and re write in such a way that ALL your friends might relate. Now you have a song to record. These are your first fans after all.


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