#1
Some people love it, some people hate it. Please feel free to tell me what you think, but if you hate it, I don't care unless you have constructive criticism. I appreciate it may not be your thing, and that's fine, but I would like to hear GOOD reasons why you don't like it other than subjective aspects.






Thanks in advance for your advice and critique!
#2
Woah, I think it's quite sexy
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#3
thats a pretty nice design, good job
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#6
i like everything except the dragon seems out of place. Needs more squiggly bits around it so it blends in better.
#7
i think the red out line should outline the drawing more, it looks a little too jagged,

but you did do a great job, you should do the whole thing
#8
I have pictures from earlier, before I put the red on and extended the artwork by the pick cover. I think it looks better with the red, but the pictures above don't show the detail near the fretboard:




The first pictures give the impression that the red softens the sharp black edges, but that actually isn't the case, I'm just a retard at taking good photos

Thanks for the comments guys
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#9
I think it would look better if it was all black, faded a bit, and no pickguard, but that's just me.

That does look pretty damn nice, though. Acoustics can look so boring.

edit: Yeah, I like it more before the red.
#10
I think it's kind of too much. I appreciate the intricacies, but the scattered design is too over the top for my taste. Also, I much prefer the simple black you had before you stuck the red on there. Personally, I think the red is a bit of an eyesore and contrasts with the browns of the guitar.
#11
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I think it's kind of too much. I appreciate the intricacies, but the scattered design is too over the top for my taste. Also, I much prefer the simple black you had before you stuck the red on there. Personally, I think the red is a bit of an eyesore and contrasts with the browns of the guitar.


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#12
That looks amazing. I REALLY like that.
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#14
the design as a whole flowed better before you added the red. still looks nice though.
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#15
Thanks guys. No, it's not got laminate or any finish. The guitar has a nice satin finish (don't like gloss finishes) and the permanent marker is put in areas where I don't put my hands. On my other guitars I haven't done as much artwork because I need a lot of the areas for percussion and just whacking the guitar occasionally
#16
yeah it looks pretty cool. but it would've been better without the red :S
#17
The red hides the details. Experiment on a scrap with a similar style pattern in black and red. Then cover the red with something that stands out. Like florescent pink or smth. Maybe an acrylic lacquer, applied with a brush, idk.
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#19
It might be the photos, but I think it looks much better without the red.
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#21
Yeah, it's definitely cool, but in my opinion without the red and without a pickguard it would look amazing.
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#22
Looks good man, in my opinion it looked better before you put the red on, but i appriciate that it could just be a bad photo. I also think you should do more tribalish stuff to fill in the gaps, looks abit randomly spaced out at the moment, good drawing skills though dude.
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#23
Better before the red. Still cool as **** though.
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