Hey Just wanted to find out what people thought of this idea ive been working on.
all opinions welcome and any advice on where to take it is appreciated
Hey champ. I can see what you were trying to do, but a lot of the notes (which fell outside of the dominant key) conflicted, which made for some uncomfortable dissonance.

I've shifted some notes around and changed the progression slightly to give you an idea of what I mean. It's in the attached file below.
Last edited by juckfush at Oct 2, 2009,
Cheers for the help guys.
Ailes that is excellent man thanks the drums and strings are quality cheers