#1
Dear sir,
I just wanted to let you know, that
I see right through that fake smile
that's ever present on your face.
I refuse to be your victim.
I hear right past those attractive lies
that you tell so well.
I refuse to listen, becuase I can't listen any longer,
or I'll feel sick to my stomach.

I'm going to close my eyes forever,
becuase if I see one more lie escape from your teeth,
Then I'll have to knock them all out.
And I'll have to cut your thoat wide open,
to prevent it from creating more lies.
And I will cut your throat wide open.
And enjoy every ****ing second,
waiting as you drown in your own blood.

You are living proof that I can trust no one.

With regards,
your former friend.
Quote by dcdossett65
Life is too short to worry about this crap.

Who.

Cares.
#2
I like this. I'm not the best at critiquing, so I don't really know how to help unless I sat and looked it over and over and over. but I do rather enjoy how it is in the form of a letter.
#3
thankyou....I feel like it's rather mediocre, but I really like the idea I have with it. I plan on reworking the majority of it.
Quote by dcdossett65
Life is too short to worry about this crap.

Who.

Cares.