Alright, I've almost finished the song I've been working on but I would love crits on it before I finish it up.

If you're interested, the lyrics are here (They're not in the recording): https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1209857

Music: http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Ghast/music/all/play710661

'When I'm Gone'
Quote by Venice King
Beethoven ****ed Jimi Hendrix and I was born. I make my own music.