#1
This is my first song ever, so be rough i want to improve.

Its about a guy that think his life sucks but then realizes its a lot better


I will either call it "Opened" or "The Line" or something else maybe.


I’m crossing the line
And I can’t define
All of the things
That were left in time

I can not see, I can not hear.
All of the things that were so near
But now that I see, life’s for living
I’m starting now and its time for me.

I opened my eyes
And then I realized
That life was so much different

Its time for me
As I can see
I’m crossing the line
And starting living

(solo I wrote)

I’m crossing the line
And I can’t define
All of the things
That were left in time------

I know its kinda short but i have a chorus in there and a solo and a guitar intro. this is just the basic lyrics.
Last edited by System|AJ at Oct 3, 2009,
#2
Hey man, please go take a look at the forum rules, specifically the ones regarding thread titles. After feel free to re-post this properly. Thanks.