#1
i wrote a song for my girl and it's the first one ive written. I wana know if this is good...the part of the chorus goes like this:the longest seconds of my life, are the seconds of hearing your voice, i wana be with you forever, won't stop till were together...thats just a little piece of the song and of course i play it on the acoustic. Just wonderin what you think.... it's kinda corny too hahaha
Last edited by doepecker at Oct 3, 2009,
#2
It's generic, but it works. I doubt she'll mind that it's generic
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