Hey UG. I want to submit this song to a local guitar contest from my country... Just to see what happens. What do you think? Should I? Also, critizice me please

It's on my profile.
Do it without a backing track and i will be impressed

pretty good i guess
If a mortal stands before us
Strike him down with sleight of hand.
And if heaven rides against us
Then God himself must be damned.

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as far as playing it's really good!

the recording is a bit rough sounding though. very grainy and a lot of static. it sound's like it's been recorded too loudly or something.
Yeah, it was the chorus. I turned it off and reuploaded it. Thanks!