It's a pretty cool song.

The intro drum track sounded a little rough, and could do with a bit of work. For starters, the volume was a bit high, but that's no biggie. =P

I didn't like to verse all that much. You're on the right track, but it seemed just a little bit too cluttered, or a little bit too fast maybe.

Chorus was pretty great. I could see a vocal melody emphasising it as well.

Loved the breakdown.

Bars 129-130 sounded a bit strange, but I think that was just guitar pro, and besides with vocals, you'd probably not even notice it.

Nice song.

EDIT: Downloading your track from LastFM now.
Wow, Forever In The Darkness is really good, mate!
Last edited by Joshe_009 at Oct 4, 2009,