I'm really likeing your clean voice, like I said before, it sounds a bit like Pete Loffery. It was a neat song, did not suck at all, but it could use some more in it. Like when you go from the clean voice to the distorted voice, it didnt really work, becuase there was no distorted guitar. I think you should add some electric guitar in there, so it makes it more defined. The end made me laugh. It was so random. But very good guitar work there.