#1
Here comes the Chair Song solo!
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"The Chair Song" is a song by my band "Tizzy". In this video I played the last lead solo, which was written and recorded by me - of cause.

I would like to get some critics by you - just let me know what you think about it, my playing, etc...
#2
Hmm, it started out kinda good but at about 0.07 it was bad :-/ Later it were okay thou, it should maybe been a little more "alive"! It was a little stiff imo!

The wasn't too good
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#3
Work on your phrasing; don't play 8th notes non stop for a whole minute. It makes it sound boring, whilst the solo actually was quite good.
So good choice of notes, bad phrasing.

***, I like the sound of your band btw.
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