#1
" The moment i saw you i knew,
You are all that is right and what is true,
and you showed me the way,
and you taught me not to stray,
and for that I'm grateful everyday.

the moment you boarded the plane,
You can call me insane,
but i knew that
i never gonna see you
i never gonna see you again.

though now i see,
you did it for me and for the sake of our lives.

please come back..."


this song is played with only one instrument, a piano, slow tempo
based on my personal love burn

would love to know what people think

good day all !

R.g
Mother****3r!!!! D0nT u l!m!t ur

M!nD

Metaldream!!!!!!!
#3
Quote by imaginary.frnd
it'd be nice to hear the actual song, but seems good anyway



the moment I'll get a camera that can record over one minute (mine sucks and cant do more than that) + a good male singer since i cant sing, i can only write, play piano and guitar, only then i will upload it

but I'll do my best to make haste

R.g
Mother****3r!!!! D0nT u l!m!t ur

M!nD

Metaldream!!!!!!!
#4
Quote by Metaldream
the moment I'll get a camera that can record over one minute (mine sucks and cant do more than that) + a good male singer since i cant sing, i can only write, play piano and guitar, only then i will upload it

but I'll do my best to make haste

R.g


Why dont you try transposing the piece so it would more or less fit in your vocal range?
#5
i have a problem about my singing i can not explain actually,
while i was recording on a studio everyone was like "wow he is amazing" the moment i started singing not in a studio without the gear and sound feedback and all of that i just seem to sound terrible to other people ... no clue how that is possible but what the hell leave the singing to the people that are actually good at it

there for it doesn't matter how i sing or what it will be right with the rhythm and scales but apparently my voice is just not good

R.g
Mother****3r!!!! D0nT u l!m!t ur

M!nD

Metaldream!!!!!!!