#1
something random i decided to do one day, so here it is

"This is it
Your story begins here"
The old man, he says to me

Clutching the scruff
Of my neck, he speaks
As my town falls around me

Now I'm a stranger in an even stranger land
Brought forward in time by the evil sinner's hand

Listen to my story
This may be our last chance
Listen to my story
I hope I'm in a trance

Temple summonings, monsters everywhere
Is this real or is it all a dream?
Black mage, white mage, opposing elements
Nothing appears to be what it seems

Miracles and oddities
Surround me everywhere
I kinda feel I don't belong
But in this place
I don't even wish to think
About being all alone

All for a journey to save the world from within
And I was brought here by the evil hand of sin

Listen to my story
This may be our last chance
Listen to my story
Don't want to see the mystic dance

(Solo)

Now when I'm with you I feel so, so alive
In your arms I am no longer a story tale
I just want to keep you in my arms, still alive
But I think now this quest of mine will still surely fail

I just don't want you to submit to fate
Please, please just wait
I, I will save you somehow
I don't care what I have to do
Break the precepts
I will keep you safe

(Solo)

I made a promise, one I intend to keep
I will vanquish sin so that faith may sleep

Listen to my story
This may be our last chance
Listen to my story
The final summoning dance

Now I've told my story
I look up to the sky
Now I've told my story
It's time to say goodbye
Quote by Heilz
When backstage and talkin to the ladies i always go with the ¨Mines is bigger than theirs¨ argument as me bro holds hes guitar and i take out my bass... It works wonders @,@


Gear list:
Squire Affinity P-Bass
Ashdown Mag300 Evo II
Boss ODB-3
#2
I like it. I like it very much. Final Fantasy X is one of my favourite games and I think these lyrics really represent how Tidus feels.

I would love to hear this on music so if you intend on doing that, let me know. I'd be really interested!
#3
as it happens, i have music written for it, i'm just a bad singer lol. but glad you like it
Quote by Heilz
When backstage and talkin to the ladies i always go with the ¨Mines is bigger than theirs¨ argument as me bro holds hes guitar and i take out my bass... It works wonders @,@


Gear list:
Squire Affinity P-Bass
Ashdown Mag300 Evo II
Boss ODB-3
#4
That's really good. I like this line, 'All for a journey to save the world from within
And I was brought here by the evil hand of sin'.
Final fantasy X is my favourite of all ff games. Definitely put it to music.
#5
for those who said i should put it to music, here's the gp5 , so hopefully you'll enjoy that as much as the lyrics
Quote by Heilz
When backstage and talkin to the ladies i always go with the ¨Mines is bigger than theirs¨ argument as me bro holds hes guitar and i take out my bass... It works wonders @,@


Gear list:
Squire Affinity P-Bass
Ashdown Mag300 Evo II
Boss ODB-3
#6
Have you ever heard A Skylit Drive's "Balance"? I'm guessing you have. That song is also about FFX.

Get rid of your "Listen to my story" stanza's as it sounds wayyyyy too much like A Skylit Drives', which goes:

"Listen to my story, this may be our last chance
'Cause people die, and people dance"
This choice is passion, this path is tension.
Last edited by Phoenix322 at Nov 5, 2009,
#7
actually, i haven't, i wasn't ware of them at all
Quote by Heilz
When backstage and talkin to the ladies i always go with the ¨Mines is bigger than theirs¨ argument as me bro holds hes guitar and i take out my bass... It works wonders @,@


Gear list:
Squire Affinity P-Bass
Ashdown Mag300 Evo II
Boss ODB-3