#2
Nice song!

I think the vocals still need some work. Sounds a bit like the singer was bored. Also the hihat is annoying because it's so loud. The distorted guitar could need a bit more PUNCH.

But I like the arrangements of the song very much. Especially after 4:02. That's a cream dream, reminds me a bit of 70s stuff. Don't know why


If you want to, you can check out my stuff in my profile!


Keep on the good work!