Vocals need some work, they often sound monotonic; or off; and dead. The guitars and the songs in general sound like something I would hear on the lock 'soft rock' station. Overall needs work.
Quote by aldo47
(i thought hot strings would make me finger faster.)
so i tried to set my strings on fire by putting a lighter on the high e string n it cut it so wtf??!!? i passed the lighter rrly slowly by it for less then a sec n then it snapped...
the singing needs work bro. it dosent sound like you have much confidence. its kinda teen music, but i think its what youre going for. you would get a girl if you played this for her though. you will get better man. just keep at it. the guitar sounds good. i like how you pick then strum the chords. keep at it.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21879671#post21879671