#1
Here it is...it's based on something that actually happened today (the day i posted it) None of it is fictional.

Now this is my very last chance
It might not make any sense
(But this could bring you home)
Your number's engraved on my head
I'll never forget what you said
(This will stain me forever)

Hello, hello, hello?
I think you've got the wrong number
Who is this, who is this?
I think you've got the wrong number

All I can do call you
Can't bear another day at school
(Without hearing your voice)
Do you ever think of me?
What we could've been, could've seen
(We could've had everything)

Hello, hello, hello?
I think you've got the wrong number
Who is this, who is this?
I think you've got the wrong number

I gave you everything I had
And you just hung up on me
You didn't recognize my voice
I know deep down it was yours
I gave you...everything...i had
And you just...hung up...on me

Hello, hello, hello?
I think you've got the wrong number
Who is this, who is this?
I think you've got the wrong number
Hello, hello, hello?
I think you've got the wrong number
Who is this, who is this?
I think you've got the wrong number

I wasn't anything to you
Last edited by Mark Roxx at Oct 5, 2009,
#2
These are alright lyrics. But you need to work on them. I like the story behind the lyrics more than the lyrics themselves. If you can find a better way to express the subject matter, it could lead to a good song. So I hope that you work on these more and post later revisions.

Also, it seems like the ending might get a little repetitive with "hello" being said twelve times.