#1
orange is mischievous;
violet is deep.
the numbers change genders
from one to the next.
in my story is a woman
who can hold things in her hands
and know about their pasts;
the stories objects tell. 

but you look at me;
all you see are ghosts.
and i was never there.
#2
I liked this. Makes me think of myself when I'm writing.

I dislike "the stories objects tell". Seems redundant. But you do move fairly well from couplet to couplet, more so than what I'm used to from you.

Does this have anything to do with synesthesia?
#3
thanks for the words man. and maybe it does have something to do with synesthesia, or maybe more precisely (after having looked it up), a sort of human effect that is def present in synesthesia, but not a per se description. i wonder if 'synesthesiac' is a word? hmm..
#4
You have always been one of the most difficult writers to read. This is utterly confusing.

It seems to be written really well, however.
#5
Quote by Ninjamonkey767
I liked this. Makes me think of myself when I'm writing.

I dislike "the stories objects tell". Seems redundant. But you do move fairly well from couplet to couplet, more so than what I'm used to from you.

Does this have anything to do with synesthesia?

I agree, I found that that line was unnecessary and broke up the otherwise solid flow of the piece.
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