#1
Hey guys i haven't posted here in a while, but im coming back with a new project called Ashlynn. Let me guys know what you think of our demo and ill be happy to crit anything you guys have =)

www.myspace.com/weareashlynn
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#2
Wow, pretty cool. Especially the vocals sound great!
For a demo it sounds nearly too perfect apart from the bassdrum which could need a bit more attack imho.

If you want to you can check out my stuff as well! (in my profile)

I'm looking forward to hear some other songs from you!
#3
thanks a lot man, we should have another one up in about a month.

i listened to the first song on your profile and it is very well written, every phrase flows right into the next one and that can be very hard to do sometimes. You do a good job of keeping one theme throughout the song that "keeps it on track." My personal tastes would have liked a bit more of variety, but that is just me. Great job
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#4
sounds sweet i like the reggee style police thing on the drums, the production is a bit boomy and reverb filled but i can hear the playing is good.

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#5
hahaha reggae? thanks for commenting, ill get on yours.
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