#2
I liked this, as you said on YouTube, there are some spots where it is a bit sloppy. It's a very good attempt for only a month of practice, and I know that in the coming months you will only get better at it. You should definitely post it again here in a month or two for us to crit again, and maybe even start attempting to do it with alternate picking! That would be extremely impressive.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1212916