#1
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/puppetzmaster8/music/all/play713096

Alright, new tune here. Kinda hard to describe it. Its got some metalcore/deathcore parts, especially the breakdowns. Theres also some straight-up metal parts as well. And the ending has a bit of a Four Year Strong-type melodic hardcore sound.

Any feedback would be great. Thanks.
#2
Quote by puppetzmaster8
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/puppetzmaster8/music/all/play713096

Alright, new tune here. Kinda hard to describe it. Its got some metalcore/deathcore parts, especially the breakdowns. Theres also some straight-up metal parts as well. And the ending has a bit of a Four Year Strong-type melodic hardcore sound.

Any feedback would be great. Thanks.


pretty tight stuff. breakdowns are always my fav. hit up my songs!

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/mikevmpr3/music/all/play522520
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#3
Quote by puppetzmaster8
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/puppetzmaster8/music/all/play713096

Alright, new tune here. Kinda hard to describe it. Its got some metalcore/deathcore parts, especially the breakdowns. Theres also some straight-up metal parts as well. And the ending has a bit of a Four Year Strong-type melodic hardcore sound.

Any feedback would be great. Thanks.


coming from someone who doesn't typically listen to that type of music, i thought it was pretty cool. The only thing i'm not crazy about is the very last part, but that's just my opinion. I just thought it could've ended before that. But other than that, I thought it was pretty cool.

crit one of my songs? (preferably anyone of those first three)

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/psychokiller99/
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