#1
In profile, Funky Song.

I've been trying to expand a bit and write some stuff that isn't metal or rock. This idea came together within two days, it's a pretty simple song. The "bass"(really a guitar) work wasn't great and everything was sloppy, but it was quick and I didn't put much time in to it.

Hope you like it, and Crit for crit as always!
OH LAAWDDYY!!!!
#2
That stuff is FUNKAYYY!
I LOVE IT!!! Solo is off the hook, hell the whole song is.
"Everything was sloppy" lol no hardly, bro. This is professional sounding stuff right here.
Honestly I can't really say anything that needs improvement.