#2
I must say at start I absolutely despise pop punk, and I think every band plays it just for chicks to come to see them.

But this is a good intro. Sounds like it's recorded in a garage. Vary the melody and don't play it for the whole song and it should be good.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1212097
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#3
Sounds decent. Like the previous poster said, don't get attached to it and use it for the entire song :P

But on another note, I think if you played that intro and then stop part twice but on the second time you properly stop (everything) and have a little drum roll and then into the proper riff it would be even more awesome. Kinda hard to explain so if you have no clue what I'm talking about, don't worry about it

But I could be very wrong as well since i can't actually hear what it would sound like like you would be able to with a tab :P
#4
Quote by henkka_potku
I must say at start I absolutely despise pop punk, and I think every band plays it just for chicks to come to see them.

But this is a good intro. Sounds like it's recorded in a garage. Vary the melody and don't play it for the whole song and it should be good.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1212097

you are sadly mistaken if you think that.

but yeah I could see this has potential to be a full fledged song.