#1
And so begins the bull**** parade...

The double entendres and halfhearted handshakes
of October are long forgotten by March
as the blue collars and the white collars
submit
to the red white and blue collar
and the People's well-being is misplaced
amongst the pork barrels and politicking

Only the strays are alive.

We all know what politicians are
they're politicians
so, why do we keep voting?
Which country is better off?
the one ruled by a single honest man
or the one ruled by a thousand bastards?

You say freedom isn't free, and you're wrong
Freedom simply isn't.

The system hasn't failed you
The system isn't failing
It's serving its purpose beautifully

The people are content
Despite the howls of the cunningly foolish fox
Despite the anarchists passionate yelps
The people are drunk, the people are fed
The people think they're happy
and they never ask the right questions.
I want Super Saiyan abilities
Last edited by rebelmidget at Oct 9, 2009,
#2
I. ****ing. Love it. This is amazing. Every single part is awesome. The flow is perfect, the rhyme scheme is just right, and its just all around great. The only part that isnt though:

You say freedom isn't free, and you're wrong
Freedom isn't.

Typo? Oh well. Despite the typo, it still kinda breaks up the flow. But no biggie because this piece is amazing. Keep it up. C4C please? In my sig? Id love to have someone like you review it.
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#3
I loved this. I thought it was powereful all throughout. and the title is what drew me to have an interest in this to start


Quote by rebelmidget
The people think they're happy
and they never ask the right questions.


Love this line.
If I don't meet you no more in this world, I'll meet you in the next one and dont be late.

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#5
Very nice. I'm a bit confused though - are you anarchist or just really liberal?
The last lines remind me a lot of Brave New World, which if you haven't already read is worth checking out.
My politics aren't quite as extreme as yours, but I'd appreciate a critique for my latest.
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one of the best, educated and logical posts I've ever seen on UG in the Pit. Well done good sir.
#6
Thank you all for the feedback . I wrote that first line on my hand while I was taking my Philosophy midterm, then later while I road the C Train this happened.
The answer to your question, FrustratedRocka, is that I'm neither... or maybe I'm both, depending on the weather.
Doesn't really matter in the end.
Thanks again, everyone!
I want Super Saiyan abilities