#1
Another song. Recording on my profile. c4c ots

Holding Hands, Holding Hearts


I think I saw you in my sleep, the other night
When all my dreams like little angels all took flight
I think I might have seen you cry, and all those tears lie in your lap
Rise and fall against my back
No longer forced to interact, I think I might

I think I taste you in the night, lover
I think I taste you and I think that I might like the way you taste
Like memories and reveries and fantasies
I think I might, I think I might, I think I

I think I mistook you for a queen, darling,
I think you took me in your dreams and painted scenes
Of mysteries too deep to feel but real enough
To break the subtle hold of trust
I think I need time to adjust, honey

You left a letter in my heart, it took all this time to read
You left a letter and it fractured but I found it soon enough
And it put everything to rest and I confess I thought it right
Until I found you in the night

But I will put it right,
This love of mine,
I will take it out into the night.
I will put it straight,
This heart of mine,
I will take it out into the liquid night.
And I will lose this fight,
This token battle,
I will lose my war but it won’t matter.
I will put it right,
This love of ours,
I will take it to the night.

I think I saw you in my sleep, and all my dreams will set you free
And then together we will be inside this moment holding hands
And twisting hearts just in this moment we are whole and I believe
This is the beginning of a beautiful I don’t know

But I will put it right,
This love of mine,
I will take it out into the night.
I will put it straight,
This heart of mine,
I will take it out into the liquid night.
And I will lose this fight,
This token battle,
I will lose my war but it won’t matter.
I will put it right,
This love of ours,
I will take it to the night.

And at last this time will be ours
No longer taste you in my sleep
You are here with me
And this is real
At least for now
At least for now

But I will put it right,
This love of mine,
I will take it out into the night.
I will put it straight,
This heart of mine,
I will take it out into the liquid night.
And I will lose this fight,
This token battle,
I will lose my war but it won’t matter.
I will put it right,
This love of ours,
I will take it to the night.
#2
i like it a lot, im not really good at critiquing but its good, i definetly wanna listen to the recording