#3
Quote by zezikaro
May i be the first to say this.

Yuck.


May I be the first to second this?
#7
Such a helpful community we have here

Anyway about the riffs; the clean riff was nice but the second half of that clean riff (or the progression you could say) was a bit nasty >.< . The playing in the clean riff was pretty sloppy too but it's just a rough idea.

As for the metal riffs, I liked most of them even if they were a bit stereotypical metalcore . The beginning part I didn't like to these metal riffs but I'd like to hear the faster ones in a full song .

6/10 as far as the ideas go, but probably better with other instruments and some sort of lead part.